Rupert Read Co-Founder, Leave Our Kids Alone

Tony Juniper Sustainability advisor and writer
But when I Try to write an essay. I find it difficult to write/frame related sentences.
I am really not sure what my problem is. After I write an essay, I feel it’s not up to my standard. At times my essays looks silly.
Whenever I read an essay form Internet I feel I can write better. But reality is different.

Professor Michael M. Patte Bloomsburg University
Also, some educators said that when the question is “to what extent do you agree or disagree?” Students must give both points of view, they said that we cannot argue just one side. This confused me a lot.
Thank you again!

At primafacie, nowdays people think that everything should be compromisable for luxury as they are forgetting that they are living in a detrimental risk . Everyperson in the society has their own individual vehicles which are used for even very small purposes. In addition, for enhancing the technolgy industries are working 24 hours in avery transforming way as they are harming our nature in very critical way . In account of that, they are also cutting trees for the raw materials and promoting deforestation. Smoke from factories polluting air day by day which effect wild life also . Futher more, to fulfill being’s basic needs land is required because population of planet in exploding which gives output of deforestation . additionally, global warming the most curcial concern faced by the world these days increasing the probability of extinction of life of every category. The worst disasters in current period is also a outcome of these human’s working.

Susanna Abse CEO, Tavistock Centre for Couple Relationships
Hi Liz,
Thanks for this useful sample. I have a very basic query regarding task 2. In each task2 it’s mentioned to “include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience”. In this task there’s not a single example mentioned. Will it not count towards reducing the score?
Rev Paul Nicolson Taxpayers Against Poverty
mass media has a great influence on people lives all over the globe . There are school of thought that impact of news media is a negative development . In my opinon , it enlightens and widen the horizon in a positive way .
Dr Lindsay Peer CBE Psychologist
the popularity of mass media often has significant influences on people life . some people belive this to be a positive development .
to what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Claude Knights FRSA Director of Kidscape
You need to read the introduction more carefully. Here is the opinion: “However, in my opinion, while I believe that such sites are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on local communities.“. You can see that it is balanced approach which claims that it is positive for individuals but negative for communities.
Sue Gerhardt Author and psychotherapist
You write your opinion and nothing more. It does not ask you discuss both sides. If you agree, then your whole essay explains why. If you disagree, your whole essay explains that. See my advanced lessons to learn exactly how to write IELTS essays:
Fiona Danks Co-author, Going Wild books
There is a specific structure and technique to writing an IELTS essay. Think about getting one of my advanced lessons just to see the technique. . Also make sure you prepare ideas for all common topics so you have plenty of ideas ready to use for essays (as well as speaking part 3).